Tag: new writers
group name: firsttimewriters
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November 19, 2006 09:05 PM EST --
Okay..I am asking for constructive critisizm. My writing assignment was to create a character only using physicallity, action or speech. (or all 3 combined) I could not use "Thought". I had to . . .
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November 20, 2006 04:37 AM EST --
Graceful deer jumping,
leaving the hunters behind
for another try.
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Giggling girls running,
playing tag, having fun
lost in innocense.
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Sobbing with such pain,
tears falling down . . .
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September 18, 2008 05:11 PM EDT --
I've always kept my writing for myself until recently. Now that I'm looking to write and get published a dilemma has occured. By surfing the forums, reading posts, and joining critique . . .
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July 08, 2007 09:54 PM EDT --
The Kitchen Dance
by Geri G. Taylor
Thick humid air filled my lungs and I stifled the urge to cough. My shoulders convulsed and sent pulses of pain directly to the slice in my arm. . . .
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November 27, 2006 12:49 PM EST --
Chapter 7
(from Chapter (6) The contractor had brought in the 'wrong' colored granite and her father had a huge fit.
(7) All in all it turned out the way her father had wanted...it was just . . .
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January 17, 2007 10:28 PM EST --
She crys a river
For a dream that will never be
No love, no hope, all is lost
As it all just fades away
What has she done
Not much to say
Pains replace all that was to be
To grow old and live to love . . .
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July 01, 2008 09:57 PM EDT --
Dark days are coming. I can feel the weakness in the earth, see the falling levels of rivers and oceans, hear the stillness that begins to settle over the whole of Divica. The entirety of my life has . . .
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November 24, 2006 07:23 PM EST --
Chapter 4:
She decided that with her lil' chat with Lorriane that she would offer to watch her grand-daughter for a week-end and give her a break. Ok..now she had to get her thoughts back to . . .
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August 27, 2008 03:29 PM EDT --
I know some of you have been anxiously awaiting the next Divica book, and it seemed to some that I have himed and hawed at getting a move on. The wait is nearly over, and I appreciate your patience.
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November 21, 2006 12:28 PM EST --
Let me know what you think. I realize that it needs editing...grammar and such, but I've actually just been letting my fingers fly. Yes do critique. Thank you in advance.
Chapter One:
The leaves were . . .
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May 11, 2007 12:08 PM EDT --
What a difference a day makes. Dinah Washington had a #5 hit singing that tune back in 1959. I hit the top with that same song in my heart nearly 50 years later. . . .
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June 28, 2008 04:15 PM EDT --
Chapter 1
Day and Night
The onyx walls of Mordelic bulged at the seams. Men, women, and children too poor to afford housing took up residence in narrow . . .
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June 20, 2008 04:16 PM EDT --
Extended through September!!!
Please let me know if you are interested.
Blood Forsaken (Epic Fantasy)
By Star Davies
Released April 2008
I am setting up a virtual . . .
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